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    I think they got something there... operationconcrete.com

    No, i wasn't hired to make this viral... just love the feel of the whole thing.
  2.  
    Felt like an angsty teenager's A-Level film project/video essay. Feels like the output of someone who considers themself a bit of an intellectual, but who doesn't understand the difference between important and grandiose.
    Isn't helped by the hammy acting.
    At least 90 secs too long as well. (I glazed over quite quickly and my tolerance level for obscure bullshit is quite high.)
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    A little melodramatic perhaps? "Grounded itself in the TERRA-FIRMA OF TIME" -- sounds like a Bill Bailey gag.

    I'd say it's more like about 5 minutes too long.

  4.  
    Oddly enough, it's the showiness of the editing and sound shifts that completely distracts from what's being said, which is something of an own goal when you consider the birth of the project is the writing. He could be talking about mutated cricket bats in the middle for all the focus the viewers been allowed by that point. He's recounting a monologue - the audience needs to be drawn along, encouraged to follow and guided as they go - but the production fights against that. Execution not suitable to the expression of content.

    IMHO.
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    Bored after 20seconds.
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    it's shit

 
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